This game has a lot of potential! I think if you were to add voice actors and some more ambience to some of the areas it would help a lot! Looking forward to the full game!
i thought this was fantastic, your story telling and the level of terror i felt especially at the end, and the way the jumpscares got me every time, this was fantastic and has so much potential and im excited to see the final product!
The game glitched for me at the convenience store part. I was not able to grab anything and the doors kept closing in front of me not letting me inside the store until a bit later.
Das ist nicht das erste Spiel, dass ich von diesem Entwickler spiele und wie schon zuvor muss ich sagen, sehr gut gelungen. Das Thema ist sehr heikel und ich glaube man kann dieses unangenehme Gefühl kaum realistisch rüberbringen was Personen in solch Situationen empfinden, aber der Ansatz hier ist ziemlich gut denke ich. Die Atmosphäre ist jederzeit unangenehm und man fühlt sich zu keiner Zeit sicher... und natürlich hast du mich mit deinen Jumpscares wieder erwischt!!! Bin extrem gespannt auf die finale Version ;)
Ok so here is my 2 cents: the atmosphere is absolutely great! The tension, tense and release moments, scary (but not only jumpscare) moments, all well paced.
My little suggestions: -reduce action area, you are solo dev and already can make a great atmosphere, making it on smaller area will help you don't overload yourself with work (assets, sounds, events etc.) -add more activities like: light switching, object picking and viewing, turning faucets on/off etc., generally speaking something more than just linear activities that needs to be done -focus on indoor areas, these looks great, outdoor need work especially grass (I know it's the hard part so maybe there is no need in adding it to final game version) -focus on story (who is our character, why she calls grandpa instead police. why she broke up with her bf etc.)
Make it all in like 1-2 hours experience and it will be really nice game to offer for real money on Steam.
One of the best games in development this year on itch.io. feedback: The texts go by very quickly and there was no time to read most of them; The night in the mansion is absurdly dark and the flashlight is very bad (I almost gave up at that point).
It was so dark that I couldn't see the switches and I went to sleep, I could read her saying something about it but I couldn't read everything. Most of the texts I couldn't read (English is not my native language). I saw that there are some moments where we have to press the space key to pass the text. I think it would be ideal. But the absurd darkness is what bothers me most about horror games. Most developers are exaggerating the darkness and it is difficult to find your way around and especially to record for YouTube (which darkens the video even more).
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I felt that I was being watched during the game. cant wait to playing full game.
thanks to let us playing demo !
Thanks! :)
It has such a good ambiance and really got be jumping.
GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Thank you!
No thank you for making this game
Really enjoyed it! Looking foward to the release!
Thanks for playing! :)
It has been a while since a game has made me feel so tensed, fantastic demo and lovely house btw, great job :)
Thank you! :)
Great work! Keep it up!
Thank you very much! :D
I really enjoyed the demo, and I can't wait to play the full game! it's got me hooked, and I'm pretty sure there's vampires involved! Great job!
Thanks! :)
Thank you! :D
scary but good and great and awesome game man!
Thanks man!
no problem!!!
love the game it was so good keep up that good work man
good game, looking forward to the full release
Thanks! :)
Thanks for the feedback!
i thought this was fantastic, your story telling and the level of terror i felt especially at the end, and the way the jumpscares got me every time, this was fantastic and has so much potential and im excited to see the final product!
Thank you so much!
Thanks! :)
love the game it was so good keep up that good work man
Thank you! :)
Enjoyed the game, can't wait for the full release!
This game is amazing I can't wait for the full game to come out!
Thanks! :D
No worries, and thank you!
Thanks! :)
The game glitched for me at the convenience store part. I was not able to grab anything and the doors kept closing in front of me not letting me inside the store until a bit later.
Did you take the items with the indicator above them?
The indicators did not load for me :(
That's very strange... do you happen to have it recorded?
I do! I can email it to you to see if perhaps I did not trigger something in game.
Oh wait no...nvm I didnt...No worries! I will try to see if reinstalling will make it work :)
This is a really good demo. I like how you keep the tension up even when you're in broad daylight. Really nice job. Keep it up.
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Thank you very much!
Awesome Demo! If my memory serves well, I will probably get this on full release... probably :)
Thank you! :)
The game is great at keeping you in paranoid suspense. I'll be keep my eye on this one.
Thank you!
This game had me on the edge at all time. Very well done atmosphere!
Das ist nicht das erste Spiel, dass ich von diesem Entwickler spiele und wie schon zuvor muss ich sagen, sehr gut gelungen. Das Thema ist sehr heikel und ich glaube man kann dieses unangenehme Gefühl kaum realistisch rüberbringen was Personen in solch Situationen empfinden, aber der Ansatz hier ist ziemlich gut denke ich. Die Atmosphäre ist jederzeit unangenehm und man fühlt sich zu keiner Zeit sicher... und natürlich hast du mich mit deinen Jumpscares wieder erwischt!!! Bin extrem gespannt auf die finale Version ;)
Thank you! :D
I use to Stalk my ex as well went to jail for it thanks for making a game for people like me!!!!
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Ok so here is my 2 cents: the atmosphere is absolutely great! The tension, tense and release moments, scary (but not only jumpscare) moments, all well paced.
My little suggestions:
-reduce action area, you are solo dev and already can make a great atmosphere, making it on smaller area will help you don't overload yourself with work (assets, sounds, events etc.)
-add more activities like: light switching, object picking and viewing, turning faucets on/off etc., generally speaking something more than just linear activities that needs to be done
-focus on indoor areas, these looks great, outdoor need work especially grass (I know it's the hard part so maybe there is no need in adding it to final game version)
-focus on story (who is our character, why she calls grandpa instead police. why she broke up with her bf etc.)
Make it all in like 1-2 hours experience and it will be really nice game to offer for real money on Steam.
Wish you best of luck!
Thank you so much for the feedback! :)
Thanks for playing! did you use the light switches in the mansion? and was there any specific texts that went too quick or was it all of them?
Thanks for the feedback! :)
The atmosphere was on point! Cant wait for the full release